that was adorable!! I love the hand-drawn aesthetic, and combined with the poetry it almost made me think of a storybook! it just had that kinda charm :>
it also seems like the subject matter is pretty personal to you, yeah? I always find that's a good thing to make art out of!
besides it really is just so damn easy to overthink, but taking and using this as a first step to bettering yourself is a great idea
I wish you the best of luck on your journey, friend❤️