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this is a pretty standard indie song at least at first, but I promise you that doesn't have to be a bad thing! You have a lot of charm to your style!
especially where you gave it your own special flair, like I really enjoy the swanky guitar/bass(?) that kicks in with the strumming!
and the fact you don't have lyrics for the "everythin's a mountain, get that through your head" is strangely refreshing to me, kinda because you have to listen to hear it for yourself?
honestly the longer one listens to this the better it gets, like that electric guitar that comes in around the last quarter of the song? MM.👌

You have a talent, my friend! Forgive my clumsy critique, but your lyrics are relatable and your style is fun❤️
keep up that good shit

edit: 2023 and I'm still listening to this and getting it stuck in my head dude, I'm pretty sure that means you did something right

hehe it me
ok but this genuinely gets stuck in my head all the time and that is your fault, I'm so proud

if there's anything I'm a sucker for it's a music box <3
came here to listen to it in full as soon as I heard it in the game!

this song made for the perfect end level in Portal Defenders, this is an absolute BOP with the perfect amount of intensity in it!
getting not only megaman vibes but also a strange vibe of undertale mixed in there somewhere...? that was probably completely unintentional but I'd consider that a very good thing seeing as Toby Fox also had very iconic music!!
very well done indeed!

Pyragmus responds:

i love the music from BOTH games!

gotdamnn!! this is funky as all heck! you can really tell the bass was the first thing you kept in mind here, you really went all out with that part and I like that a lot!
getting a much more noir version of the FNF menu type of vibe here, if you know what I mean??
just the kind of city-centric feeling, exactly what I'd feel after looking in a shady alleyway!!

I absolutely *love* the inclusion of actual typing, Paige! it goes really well with the feeling of HYPERFOCUS.
I'm really sorry you're feeling burnt out and tired already though, the schoolboard asks so much and puts so much pressure on its students without even considering how they feel...
and then they try to *act* like they care but it's very clear they don't? and remembering that some friends of mine have to go through that always makes my heart ache a little...
Never forget you're not alone, though! and you made something really nice even in such a stressful situation!

textexaz responds:

thank you, genuinely!
that means a lot.

gotdamnnn!! this is a funky beat right here, Paige!
I'm gonna say it again, you've got talent! I absolutely love the soft rock aesthetic and think you really got down the atmosphere of slightly trippy and yet comfy vibes??
and you composed this on a call too? multitasking demigod, I could never-

you use BeepBox too?? it's so interesting and has such a variety of things to use!!
I also really think your talents could be used in a game in the future! I can see it in a really retro aesthetic looking thing or maybe something like a contemplative RPG with bells and whistles!
I'm sorry about your energy sappage, but if it helps I think you did a really good job that made it worth it!

textexaz responds:

Yeah, BeepBox is really cool to use! Thank you for the kind words, they mean a lot!

oh my gosh Paige this is gorgeous!! you really have a talent!
I feel like I'm deep in warm water with nothing but darkness surrounding me, or in the neverending vacuum of space! surrounded by nothing but also... everything??
this hits me somewhere, I dunno, this is hitting me different
thank you for sharing ;;;

textexaz responds:

Thank you for the description! That was genuinely really helpful to properly understand how this tune makes others feel.

Be on the lookout for more!! :)

I think this is my most favourite thing ever now :'>

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Alaura @babygirlalaura

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